@@ -19,14 +19,16 @@ Our addition to this model is the idea of "knots". Knots are lightweight, headless servers that enable users to host git repositories with ease. Knots are designed for either single or multi-tenant use which is perfect for "community" servers. By default, Tangled provides managed knots where you can host your repositories for free.
 
 The [App View][appview] at [tangled.sh](https://tangled.sh) acts as a consolidated "view" into the whole network, allowing users to access, clone and contribute to repositories hosted across different knots -- completely seamlessly.
 
-Tangled is still in its infancy, and we're still building out several of its core features. As we do so, we developed these three core tenets to guide us:
+Tangled is still in its infancy, and we're still building out several of its core features as we dogfood it ourselves. We developed these three core tenets to guide our decisions:
 
-1. **Ownership of data**: Being able to host your git repositories on your own servers.
-2. **Must retain existing workflows**: Familiar git collaboration workflows (like PRs, issues, ... etc.) must be retained.
-3. **No compromise on user-experience**: When presented with a choice between ideology and user-experience, choose user-experience.
+1. **Ownership of data**
+2. **Low barrier to entry**
+3. **No compromise on user-experience**
 
+Collaborating on code isn't easy, and the tools and workflows we use should feel natural and stay out of the way. Tangled's architecture enables common workflows to work as you'd expect, while remaining decentralized. 
 
-We believe that atproto has greatly simplfied one of the hardest parts of social media: having your friends on it. If you have a Bluesky account, you can start building on Tangled today.
+We believe that atproto has greatly simplfied one of the hardest parts of social media: having your friends on it. We're rolling out invite-only access to Tangled -- join us on IRC and we'll get you set up. 
+
 
 [pds]: https://atproto.com/guides/glossary#pds-personal-data-server
 [appview]: https://docs.bsky.app/docs/advanced-guides/federation-architecture#app-views